Monday, 6 June 2016

Prezi with Dutch partner

https://prezi.com/m/jvqwxxhsze9o/the-curious-incident-of-the-dog-in-the-night-time/

Monday, 2 May 2016

Essay

Gas! GAS! Quick, boys! The sentry, The soldier, The attack, The arms and the boy, Dulce et decorum est, The wind on the downs and The effect are all poems which tells us how war is a brutal nightmare. The poems are about the brutality, tragedy, horrors of war and that we should never forget it. The reason why these poems are so powerful is because of all the figurative language used such as imagery, metaphors and repetition. These are used to describe the horrendous conditions during war like in the poem the sentry.

"O sir, my eyes — I'm blind — I'm blind, I'm blind!"The sentry is an important poem for a number of reasons. He describes the horrendous conditions during life in the trenches of World War One. War is a brutal nightmare. He uses figurative language such as imagery, metaphors, onomatopoeia and alliteration. The writer uses smell, hear, sight and sound imagery to describe the location. To show how horrific and brutal war was. Wilfred Owen uses metaphors such as 'Rain, guttering down in waterfalls of slime, Kept slush waist high, that rising hour by hour,' describing how horribly cold, wet and humid it was in the trenches, basically describing the conditions and location where the soldiers had to live in. The writer also uses onomatopoeia like 'whizz-bangs' which shows the atmosphere and sounds of all the artillery shooting. The writer uses powerful figurative language to support the ideas which creates the big idea. Everyone who has faught in the war certainly must be proud to have died for their country.

Some small piece of a foreign field that is forever England. The soldier is an important poem for a number of reasons. It exemplifies the attitudes of people at the beginning of ww1 as a well as being a very interesting example of the the sonnet form. The main idea of the poem is how glorious it is to die for England. The writer uses lots of powerful figurative language to support the big idea such as repetition of England, imagery, metaphors, the 2 ideas of the two stanzas. He uses metaphors such as "a dust whom England bore, shaped, made aware" which describes the idea of stanza 2, how English his dust is. The repetition of "England" supports the whole idea of English heaven and how glorious it is to die for your country. He also uses imagery such as "corner of a foreign field which describes how even though that they are not home there is still a part of England. The writer uses lots of figurative language to support the ideas which create the big idea. From the outside the soldiers might seem not that scared or sad whilst in the inside they are terrified, hopeless and desperate. Its like some were an invisible mask, like they are hiding away from their feelings and not wanting to show and reviel them.

O jesus make it stop. Attack, by Siegfried Sassoon is a powerful poem about 'going over the top', that uses imagery and metaphors to serve the main idea. The main idea of the poem is that the situation is hopeless and the men are desperate.The sight imagery is best exemplified by "lines of grey.....masked with fear" telling us how the soldiers were hiding away their feelings not wanting to show what they really felt and how it was like. As well as  "hope with furtive eyes and grappling fists" shows us how the soldiers are hopeless and that hope is as if avoiding the soldiers.  And an example of auditory (sound) imagery is "the barrage roars and lifts" which emphases how harsh war was and how the barrage is like a monster, something horrific. Siegfried Sassoon uses imagery and metaphors to show how the soldiers were hopeless and desperate. And she explains these by using animals or creatures, to give over a point that humans are not made for fighting and killing each other which Wilfred Owen is trying to bring over.

Sharp with the sharpness of grief and death. Arms and the boy, by Wilfred Owen is a powerful poem about soldiers in WW1, that uses metaphors and imagery to serve the main idea. The main idea of the poem is that war is unnatural. The metaphor 'how cold steel is...hunger of blood' describes how the gun is like an animal or a creature who kills something. The imagery 'Blue with all malice, like madmans flash' show us how the gun is hungry for humans, again referring the gun to a animal or creature. 'Or give him cartridges of fine zinc teeth' tells us how the bullets are like the teeth biting through flesh. 'Stroke these blind, blunt bullet-heads' describes us how desperate they are to kill. Another metaphor such as 'for his teeth seem for laughing round an apple' and as well as the imagery of the last three lines 'no claws....not talons....nor antlers' which tells us humans are not animals and that they are not designed to kill. Wilfred Owen uses lots of descriptive language like metaphors and imagery to show us how war is unnatural. However dulce et decorum est gives a better idea of the imagery, explaining the horrendous gas attacks.

Gas! GAS! Quick, boys! Dulce et Decorum Est, by Wilfred Owen is a powerful poem about 'how disastrous the gas attack was', which uses figurative language such as imagery, similes and metaphors. The main idea of  the poem is dying for your country is Not sweet and beautiful. 'Dim through the misty panes and thick green light, As under a green sea, I saw him drowning' this is a simile, metaphor and imagery which describes the dropping of gas shells, how the soldiers are dragged down through the horrors of war. The last two lines 'The old Lie: Dulce et decorum est pro patria mori' means in Latin; how sweet and proper it is to die for your country but the word just in front 'lie' tells us they mean the opposite. Siegfried uses the last two lines to define the big idea 'it is not sweet and beautiful to die for your country'. Siegfried uses lots of figurative language to support the big idea. Not only the soldiers are captured in this nightmare however also the people who are not fighting. Like the women waiting for days, weeks and months for their beloved to come back. They have been waiting so long some of them have forgotten how they look like, they can only see them in their khaki uniforms.

How should you leave me, having loved me so? The wind on the downs, by Marian Allen is a poem which uses lots of repetition and imagery. The big idea of this poem is that she can't remember his face and she can only remember his khaki figure. An example of Imagery is ".....as brown and tall...strong...in Khaki tunic.." this describes her imagining him how her boyfriend looks like, and how she can only imagine him in his uniform. There is lots of repetition used of "I..you...me..we", this is very powerful because it shows how war was like for the men and women who missed their beloved. She is describing him how she wants him to look like, she is hiding from the fact he might be dead. Marian Allen shows in this poem the pain of missing your beloved, her confusion; she doesn't really know how his husband really looks. She is remembering the things they did together before. Waiting and waiting because she doesn't want to believe that he is dead.

He'd never seen so many dead before. The effect, by Siegfried Sassoon is a powerful poem which uses lots of metaphors to describe what happens to the soldiers in world war one. The big idea of this poem is that too many men are dying. The poem uses metaphors such as "Flapping along the fire-step like a fish" this refers the soldiers as fish who are dying outside the water, how the fish can't breath. This describes how the soldiers are dying slowly in pain. "They sprawled in yellow daylight while he swore" describes how loads of soldiers are spread out and loads of soldiers are covering the hole land either dead or trying to survive. Siegfried Sassoon uses figurative language but mostly metaphors to show that too many people are dying and being dragged down in the horrors of war.

O Jesus make it stop! The poets Wilfred Owen, Rupert Brooke, Siegfried Sassoon and Marian Allen wrote poems which tells us how war is a brutal nightmare.The poems are about the brutality, tragedy, horrors of war and how we should never forget. Some of these poems have shown by means of metaphors how the soldiers are dragged down through the horrors of war. Showing the transformation of men from being happy and kind to being grey with dying eyes. And how the bullets are like the teeth biting through flesh and ripping and tearing it apart. Also by using imagery it describes precisely, the gases and how hopeless were the soldiers. These poems shows how we should never forget the death and tragedy of war. 






Friday, 29 April 2016

Henry V

Rhetoric:
Ethos (Morality, religion):
(Great people)- in the name of God all mighty-->Edward third
Gift of heaven

Pathos (Emotion):
-fierce tempest
-thunder
-earthquake
--> imagery of nature

Logos (Reason):
-law of nature 
-law of nations

If requiring fail, he will compel (definition:force)
Fail-compel =juxtaposition 

Tuesday, 12 April 2016

Essay poems

Gas! GAS! Quick, boys! The sentry, the soldier, the attack, the arms and the boy, Dulce et decorum, The wind on the downs and the effect are all poems which tells us how war is a brutal nightmare. The poems are about the brutality, tragedy, horrors of war and we should never forget.
The reason why these poems are so powerful is because of all the figurative language used such as imagery, metaphors and repetition. 

"O sir, my eyes — I'm blind — I'm blind, I'm blind!"The sentry is an important poem for a number of reasons. He describes the horrendous conditions during life in the trenches of World War One. War is a brutal nightmare. He uses figurative language such as imagery, metaphors, onomatopoeia and alliteration. The writer uses smell, hear, sight and sound imagery to describe the location. To show how horrific and brutal war was. Wilfred Owen uses metaphors such as 'Rain, guttering down in waterfalls of slime, Kept slush waist high, that rising hour by hour,' describing how horribly cold, wet and humid it was in the trenches, basically describing the conditions and location where the soldiers had to live in. The writer also uses onomatopoeia like 'whizz-bangs' which shows the atmosphere and sounds of all the artillery shooting. The writer uses powerful figurative language to support the ideas which creates the big idea.

Some small piece of a foreign field that is forever England. The soldier is an important poem for a number of reasons. It exemplifies the attitudes of people at the beginning of ww1 as a well as being a very interesting example of the the sonnet form. The main idea of the poem is how glorious it is to die for England. The writer uses lots of powerful figurative language to support the big idea such as repetition of England, imagery, metaphors, the 2 ideas of the two stanzas. He uses metaphors such as "a dust whom England bore, shaped, made aware" which describes the idea of stanza 2, how English his dust is. The repetition of "England" supports the whole idea of English heaven and how glorious it is to die for your country. He also uses imagery such as "corner of a foreign field which describes how even though that they are not home there is still a part of England. The writer uses lots of figurative language to support the ideas which create the big idea.

O jesus make it stop. Attack, by Siegfried Sassoon is a powerful poem about 'going over the top', that uses imagery and metaphors to serve the main idea. The main idea of the poem is that the situation is hopeless and the men are desperate.The sight imagery is best exemplified by "lines of grey.....masked with fear" telling us how the soldiers were hiding away their feelings not wanting to show what they really felt and how it was like. As well as  "hope with furtive eyes and grappling fists" shows us how the soldiers are hopeless and that hope is as if avoiding the soldiers.  And an example of auditory (sound) imagery is "the barrage roars and lifts" which emphases how harsh war was and how the barrage is like a monster, something horrific. Siegfried Sassoon uses imagery and metaphors to show how the soldiers were hopeless and desperate.

Sharp with the sharpness of grief and death. Arms and the boy, by Wilfred Owen is a powerful poem about soldiers in WW1, that uses metaphors and imagery to serve the main idea. The main idea of the poem is that war is unnatural. The metaphor 'how cold steel is...hunger of blood' describes how the gun is like an animal or a creature who kills something. The imagery 'Blue with all malice, like madmans flash' show us how the gun is hungry for humans, again referring the gun to a animal or creature. 'Or give him cartridges of fine zinc teeth' tells us how the bullets are like the teeth biting through flesh. 'Stroke these blind, blunt bullet-heads' describes us how desperate they are to kill. Another metaphor such as 'for his teeth seem for laughing round an apple' and as well as the imagery of the last three lines 'no claws....not talons....nor antlers' which tells us humans are not animals and that they are not designed to kill. Wilfred Owen uses lots of descriptive language like metaphors and imagery to show us how war is unnatural.

Gas! GAS! Quick, boys! Dulce et Decorum Est, by Wilfred Owen is a powerful poem about 'how disastrous the gas attack was', which uses figurative language such as imagery, similes and metaphors. The main idea of  the poem is dying for your country is Not sweet and beautiful. 'Dim through the misty panes and thick green light, As under a green sea, I saw him drowning' this is a simile, metaphor and imagery which describes the dropping of gas shells, how the soldiers are dragged down through the horrors of war. The last to lines 'The old Lie: Dulce et decorum est pro patria mori' means in Latin; how sweet and proper it is to die for your country but the word just in front 'lie' tells us they mean the opposite. Siegfried uses the last to lines to define the big idea 'it is not sweet and beautiful to die for your country'. Siegfried uses lots of figurative language to support the big idea.

How should you leave me, having loved me so? The wind on the downs, by Marian Allen is a poem which uses lots of repetition and imagery. The big idea of this poem is that she can't remember his face and she can only remember his khaki figure. An example of Imagery is ".....as brown and tall...strong...in Khaki tunic.." this describes her imagining him how her boyfriend looks like, and how she can only imagine him in his uniform. There is lots of repetition used of "I..you...me..we", this is very powerful because it shows how war was like for the men and women who missed their beloved. She is describing him how she wants him to look like, she is hiding from the fact he might be dead. Marian Allen shows in this poem the pain of missing your beloved, her confusion; she doesn't really know how his husband really looks. She is remembering the things they did together before. Waiting and waiting because she doesn't want to believe that he is dead.

He'd never seen so many dead before. The effect, by Siegfried Sassoon is a powerful poem which uses lots of metaphors to describe what happens to the soldiers in world war one. The big idea of this poem is that too many men are dying. The poem uses metaphors such as "Flapping along the fire-step like a fish" this refers the soldiers as fish who are dying outside the water, how the fish can't breath. This describes how the soldiers are dying slowly in pain. "They sprawled in yellow daylight while he swore" describes how loads of soldiers are spread out and loads of soldiers are covering the hole land either dead or trying to survive. Siegfried Sassoon uses figurative language but mostly metaphors to show that too many people are dying and being dragged down in the horrors of war.

O Jesus make it stop! The sentry, the soldier, the attack, the arms and the boy, Dulce et decorum, The wind on the downs and the effect are all poems which tells us how war is a brutal nightmare.
The poems are about the brutality, tragedy, horrors of war and how we should never forget.
Some of these poems have shown by means of metaphors how the soldiers are dragged down through the horrors of war. Showing the transformation of men from being happy and kind to being grey with dying eyes. And how the bullets are like the teeth biting through flesh and ripping and tearing it apart. Also by using imagery it describes precisely, the gases and how hopeless were the soldiers. How she can only remember him in his khaki tunic and not his face. These poems shows how we should never forget the death and tragedy of war. 


Thursday, 24 March 2016

On passing the new menin gate paragraph

Here was the worlds worst wound. On passing the New Menin Gate, by Siegfried Sassoon is a powerful poem about 'sacrifice' which uses imagery to serve the poem.The big idea of this poem is that who will remember the dead  people because people will just walk away and won't remember the names. "....endured that sullen swamp" and "struggled in the slime" are examples of imagery of sight which describes the condition and location which the soldiers had to cope with. "Here was the worlds worst wound" is an example of a metaphor and imagery which describes the sight refering the soldiers to a wound. It tells us that loads of soldiers have died and that you can only see blood, which shows the impact of war. Siegfried Sassoon uses all this figurative language to show how many people have given their lives for us and that half of them are not even seen because there are just too many deaths and injuries. Who will remember the all the dead people?!
 

The effect paragraph

 He'd never seen so many dead before. The effect, by Siegfried Sassoon is a powerful poem which uses lots of metaphors to describe what happens to the soldiers in world war one. The big idea of this poem is that too many men are dying. The poem uses metaphors such as "Flapping along the fire-step like a fish" this refers the soldiers as fish who are dying outside the water, how the fish can't breath. This describes how the soldiers are dying slowly in pain. "They sprawled in yellow daylight while he swore" describes how loads of soldiers are spread out and loads of soldiers are covering the hole land either dead or trying to survive. Siegfried Sassoon uses figurative language but mostly metaphors to show that too many people are dying and being dragged down in the horrors of war.

The wind on the downs paragraph


How should you leave me, having loved me so? The wind on the downs, by Marian Allen is a poem which uses lots of repetition and imagery. The big idea of this poem is that she can't remember his face and she can only remember his khaki figure. An example of Imagery is ".....as brown and tall...strong...in Khaki tunic.." this describes her imagining him how her boyfriend looks like, and how she can only imagine him in his uniform. There is lots of repetition used of "I..you...me..we", this is very powerful because it shows howwar was like for the men and women who missed their beloved. She is describing him how she wants him to look like, she is hiding from the fact he might be dead. Marian Allen shows in this poem the pain of missing your beloved, her confusion; she doesn't really know how his husband really looks. She is remembering the things they did together before. Waiting and waiting because she doesn't want to believe that he is dead.

Dulce et decorum est paragraph

Gas! GAS! Quick, boys! Dulce et Decorum Est, by Wilfred Owen is a powerful poem about 'how disastrous the gas attack was', which uses figurative language such as imagery, similes and metaphors. The main idea of  the poem is dying for your country is Not sweet and beautiful. 'Dim through the misty panes and thick green light, As under a green sea, I saw him drowning' this is a simile, metaphor and imagery which describes the dropping of gas shells, how the soldiers are dragged down through the horrors of war. The last to lines 'The old Lie: Dulce et decorum est pro patria mori' means in Latin; how sweet and proper it is to die for your country but the word just in front 'lie' tells us they mean the opposite. Siegfried uses the last to lines to define the big idea 'it is not sweet and beautiful to die for your country'. Siegfried uses lots of figurative language to support the big idea.

Sunday, 20 March 2016

Arms and the boy paragraph

Sharp with the sharpness of grief and death. Arms and the boy, by Wilfred Owen is a powerful poem about soldiers in WW1, that uses metaphors and imagery to serve the main idea. The main idea of the poem is that war is unnatural. The metaphor 'how cold steel is...hunger of blood' describes how the gun is like an animal or a creature who kills something. The imagery 'Blue with all malice, like madmans flash' show us how the gun is hungry for humans, again referring the gun to a animal or creature. 'Or give him cartridges of fine zinc teeth' tells us how the bullets are like the teeth biting through flesh. 'Stroke these blind, blunt bullet-heads' describes us how desperate they are to kill. Another metaphor such as 'for his teeth seem for laughing round an apple' and as well as the imagery of the last three lines 'no claws....not talons....nor antlers' which tells us humans are not animals and that they are not designed to kill. Wilfred Owen uses lots of descriptive language like metaphors and imagery to show us how war is unnatural.

Link for analysis of Arms and the boy

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AvqePsLs_pg

The attack paragraph

O jesus make it stop. Attack, by Siegfried Sassoon is a powerful poem about 'going over the top', that uses imagery and metaphors to serve the main idea. The main idea of the poem is that the situation is hopeless and the men are desperate.The sight imagery is best exemplified by "lines of grey.....masked with fear" telling us how the soldiers were hiding away their feelings not wanting to show what they really felt and how it was like. As well as  "hope with furtive eyes and grappling fists" shows us how the soldiers are hopeless and that hope is as if avoiding the soldiers.  And an example of auditory (sound) imagery is "the barrage roars and lifts" which emphases how harsh war was and how the barrage is like a monster, something horrific. Siegfried Sassoon uses imagery and metaphors to show how the soldiers were hopeless and desperate.

Tuesday, 15 March 2016

The soldier paragraph

Some small piece of a foreign field that is forever England. The soldier is an important poem for a number of reasons. It exemplifies the attitudes of people at the beginning of ww1 as a well as being a very interesting example of the the sonnet form. The main idea of the poem is how glorious it is to die for England. The writer uses lots of powerful figurative language to support the big idea such as repetition of England, imagery, metaphors, the 2 ideas of the two stanzas. He uses metaphors such as "a dust whom England bore, shaped, made aware" which describes the idea of stanza 2, how English his dust is. The repetition of "England" supports the whole idea of English heaven and how glorious it is to die for your country. He also uses imagery such as "corner of a foreign field which describes how even though that they are not home there is still a part of England. The writer uses lots of figurative language to support the ideas which create the big idea

The sentry paragraph

"O sir, my eyes — I'm blind — I'm blind, I'm blind!"The sentry is an important poem for a number of reasons. He describes the horrendous conditions during life in the trenches of World War One. War is a brutal nightmare. He uses figurative language such as imagery, metaphors, onomatopoeia and alliteration. The writer uses smell, hear, sight and sound imagery to describe the location. To show how horrific and brutal war was. Wilfred Owen uses metaphors such as 'Rain, guttering down in waterfalls of slime, Kept slush waist high, that rising hour by hour,' describing how horribly cold, wet and humid it was in the trenches, basically describing the conditions and location where the soldiers had to live in. The writer also uses onomatopoeia like 'whizz-bangs' which shows the atmosphere and sounds of all the artillery shooting. The writer uses powerful figurative language to support the ideas which creates the big idea

Tuesday, 1 March 2016

Poem

Arms and the Boy

BY WILFRED OWEN
Let the boy try along this bayonet-blade 
How cold steel is, and keen with hunger of blood; 
Blue with all malice, like a madman's flash; 
And thinly drawn with famishing for flesh. 

Lend him to stroke these blind, blunt bullet-leads, 
Which long to nuzzle in the hearts of lads, 
Or give him cartridges of fine zinc teeth 
Sharp with the sharpness of grief and death. 

For his teeth seem for laughing round an apple. 
There lurk no claws behind his fingers supple; 
And God will grow no talons at his heels, 
Nor antlers through the thickness of his curls.

Sunday, 21 February 2016

Rain repetition

Hook: Hear and listen to the rain.
Introduction: Repetition is when a word or phrase is repeated lots of times.
Thesis: The poem rain uses a great deal of repetition by describing it as human senses
Examples/explanation: When he says "hear the rain" he applies the affects of rain on human senses to evoke the threat of war. Later in the poem he says "solitary, listening to the rain" this also uses human senses however the use of repetition also gives a sad tone showing the soldier’s loneliness, with the word  “solitude”. And then together this shows how war gives the sense of entrapment and being alone not willing to talk to anyone. This describes how awful war was.
Conclusion: The writer uses powerful repetition to explain how war was like, to give a sense of war as if we are in it...using human senses like hearing.

Friday, 22 January 2016

The soldier

If I should die, think only this of me: 
      That there’s some corner of a foreign field 
That is for ever England. There shall be 
      In that rich earth a richer dust concealed; 
A dust whom England bore, shaped, made aware, 
      Gave, once, her flowers to love, her ways to roam; 
A body of England’s, breathing English air, 
      Washed by the rivers, blest by suns of home. 

And think, this heart, all evil shed away, 
      A pulse in the eternal mind, no less 
            Gives somewhere back the thoughts by England given; 
Her sights and sounds; dreams happy as her day; 
      And laughter, learnt of friends; and gentleness, 
            In hearts at peace, under an English heaven.

Physical and spiritual

Tuesday, 12 January 2016

Jargon

Definition:
Exclusive jargon: confused unintelligible language
Inclusive jargon: a hybrid language or dialect simplified in vocabulary and grammar and used for communication between peoples of different speech

Inclusive Jargon:
Offside
Penalty
Corner
Offence
Defence
Free kick
Hand ball
Goal keeper
Throw in
Marking
Goal kick
Ball
Shin pads
Football boots
Studs